Lost in the forest
Brushing aside yellow leaves
A setting sun drifts
Yearning for my seaside town
I taste wet salt on my lips
Babe in the Woods
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Thank You for Sharing this Beautiful Inspiration 🙂 Blessings, my Dear Friend 🙂
Thanks! The same to you. ❤
Beautiful.
Thank you. =)
Beyond exquisite! Poetry one can experience with all the senses!
Good to know this evoked the senses well. Thanks! ❤
Lovely Tanka, Ms. Wong! It’s been awhile since I’ve written haiku or Tanka so I think you might have inspired me again. Thanks so much for all of your visits to my blog and I hope you’ve enjoyed and will continue. I’m now following you, too! Have a lovely evening!
Lauren
Thank you! And yes, please consider writing haiku and tanka again. You have a great day too. =)
lovely. so true how the memories and senses, past and present can all be mixed up together
Thanks! I’m glad the hodgepodge still worked. =)
! no! the poem is not a hodgepodge. it’s a beautifully constructed piece. i was speaking about the hodgepodge of memories
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Thank you for the reblog! ❤
You’re welcome!