Meager are my words
to entice your ardor
but safe are these arms
open to you in harbor.
For passion soon
spends its wily self
and wrecks my heart’s
most fragile health.
So I love you
in those subtle ways
that promise not only nights
but all my days.
Warmth radiates
everlasting
If you choose
a mild sun
for the basking.
Ahhh! Now THIS is poetry! Nicely done!!
Hehe. Glad you think so. *bows*
Oh!!! Beautiful!!! Love!
Thanks! ❤
Amazing, i love this one so much.
So glad you do. =D
Your words are beautifu, always manage make my heart beat a little faster 🙂
That’s such a compliment. Thanks! ❤
The last 2 stanzas are gorgeous ❤
Glad it ended on a good note. =)
Very well put.
Thank you. =)
Brilliant.
=)
just beaautiful!
Thanks! I’m happy you found it so. =)
I love the way you ended this poem. The thought of a mild sun and its similarity to a gentle love is a very appealing concept.
Thanks! I’m glad you approve. =)
Wow!
Simply awesome… 🙂 nice to meet you ❤
Thanks! And nice to meet you too. Glad you dropped by. =)
I want to live in this photo
Thanks! I found it in the public domain so I’m sure you’ll see another one like it. =)
Aww, this is beautiful and I love romance so this hit home in a nice way. ♥
Thanks! I’m glad it was resonant. =)
So beautiful and poetic! I loved these lines especially:
“Warmth radiates
everlasting
If you choose
a mild sun
for the basking.”
Wonderful. 🙂
Thank you! It’s good to know I ended on a powerful note. =)
A very beautiful work. Love the end… 🙂
‘Mild sun for basking’ … wow! Amazing!
Thanks! Glad you liked it. =)
🙂