the wind stole my voice
and carried it beyond
when I made you a promise
the sun sets
but it’ll rise again
through the dark night
the moon and stars
company and comfort
so even when
the sight of my back
but a memory
remember that promise
is always fulfilled
11 thoughts on “In Good Company”
I love this. Not a word too much.
Thanks so much, Jane! ❤
Reblogged this on Jane Dougherty Writes and commented:
Lovely thoughts for a Tuesday morning.
Reblogged this on MorgEn Bailey's Creative Writing Blog and commented:
A charming poem from T Wong…
I especially love the opening–what a great lead-in. I was just wondering about you today, so I’m relieved to read you tonight 🙂
Thanks! I’m okay. Life has a few ups and downs, but I’m trying to schedule more ups. It’s spring were I am so the outdoors will help. Hope you’re doing well. =)
Beautiful word choice. I agree with Jane…not a word too much. It is seasoned perfectly!
Thanks, Tanya! =)
Touching poetry! Love the flow.
Glad you liked this one. =)