Under sunlight, thoughts melt
into a pleasing mirage
and dreams usually feeble
acquire a strange lucidity
Vivid Daydreams
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RED GLADIOLA 
I sensed this was a part of a pair, along with the Execution quatrain. Might they be more strong and suggestive, or clarifying, if they were put together? You seem to have a better skill than most poets at considering a reader, and providing them with lovely manipulation of thought. Every poem a little ride. Thanks.
So glad you appreciated both poems! They were written one after another. The connection you sensed must have been subconscious to me. Surprising! Thanks for pointing that out. =)