Seascape

Seascape

I refuse to believe
in the lack of even
the gentlest zephyr
or swelling tide of sea;
surely you fool me with
a calm ship
on an acrylic —
See!

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Author: redgladiola

Creative writer happily predisposed to flights of fancy. You can find my poetry and short prose at https://redgladiola.wordpress.com

13 thoughts on “Seascape”

  1. I like the poem, the thought and the whole tone, but might it be better if it didn’t start out with a double negative? “I refuse to believe in the lack of…” sounds wordy — but I’m not sure how you’d restate it.

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