passing on the bridge
the beams hold still
from the weight
of lovers’ locks
I peer down
into
the sea:
a graveyard of keys
passing on the bridge
the beams hold still
from the weight
of lovers’ locks
I peer down
into
the sea:
a graveyard of keys
I want to hear more about this place…thanks for making me aware of it.
I wasn’t thinking of a specific place, but many bridges and towers do have the “lovers’ locks” mentioned. =)
Great mention! googly true! Had no idea before your poem.
Love the different perspective
Thank you! ❤
A key like Lazarus
Rises from the graveyard
Unlocking a solitary heart
Nice counter-poem! I’m actually glad this might be a possibility for those who want to leave bad relationships. =)
Beautiful lines…I have seen the place in pics but you said it more vividly..:)
Aw, that’s sweet of you to say. Thanks! ❤
How surreal and yet so poignant ❤❤❤
Glad you enjoyed it! ❤
I love this. The imagery is brilliant.
Thank you! =)
An image came to me of broken love and tossing the others’ apartment keys into the waters of tears.
Haha. That works as a good mirror poem. You should flesh it out and write something with the scenario. =)
Wonderful imagery through beautiful writing…
Thank you! ❤