A collaborative poem between me and Crippled at Your Table. J also posted the poem on her site, so please visit and explore more of her thoughtful works!
I cannot cherry-pick
the days I’ve divided
my soul between reason and unknown.
I always step where I am told.
On this well-worn road
I cannot always discern
the next bend or turn through the deep ruts.
Do not ask me where it leads.
I am crying for someone
to come pull me from the middle,
where I stand now.
Voices ahead.
Behind.
Begging my follow through.
This yellow line is the closest friend,
knowing decision can’t be made
when force cripples my frame.
I plod through
another journey’s day.
Sending my prayers to the sky
the burden lightens
from mere acclimation.
Drifting, I hesitate against the grass
where the trodden path abuts.
Should I follow conformity’s soft
blade down to meet river comfort?
Or venture out to rock’s edge,
risking bruised & skinned knee
to hear I am loved the same
though middle ground became
my stability from the beginning?
I pray my answer comes
in your acceptance twining,
our hands’ strength becoming one.
I love the emotion on this one!
Thanks so much! ❤
The line “I always step where I am told” was really effective and I love it!!!!!
That’s one of J’s lines, so I’ll thank you in her place. =)
I understand this one deeply.
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I loved getting to collaborate with you. Thanks for letting me mingle my words with yours 🙂
“Drifting, I hesitate against the grass where the trodden path abuts.” Favorite line of yours ❤
And my favorite is your whole ending stanza. ❤
Very beautiful collaboration! ❤ On this well-worn road
I cannot always discern
the next bend or turn through the deep ruts.
Or venture out to rock’s edge,
risking bruised & skinned knee
to hear I am loved the same
though middle ground became
my stability from the beginning? ~ Love these lines immensely ❤
Thank you! You’ve actually chosen lines from both J and me, so I’m doubly glad. ❤
Your collaboration was a perfect blend. Great writing from two great pens ❤
This is beautiful!
Thanks! =)
Wonderful.
Thank you! ❤
Congratulations to you and Julia for this heart-warming poem ! I loved the theme … ❤
Thank you! Julia was the one who shifted the theme to where it is and it was also a good surprise for me. =)
I’m really enjoying your poetry and the way you use metaphors – will be back to read more soon! 🙂
Thank you! I do appreciate it.
definitely a fan keep up the good work!
Thank you! Appreciate it lots. =)
Lovely and the ebb and flow of nature’s rhythm are a perfect match.
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Glad you liked this one. Thank you!
Such a stunning and lyrical poem!
“Drifting, I hesitate against the grass where the trodden path abuts.” My favorite line; I don’t know why but it strikes a deep chord.
Thank you deeply for the follow at “Beyond The Cracked Window.” I appreciate it. – Stephen
Thanks! This was a collaborative poem, so I’m afraid this line goes to my co-writer. ❤