One drifting feather
Blown between pedestrians
On its own journey
Moved by camaraderie
I wish to walk alongside
Feather
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I love the thoughtfulness behind this one. The journey.
Thanks! =)
You’re welcome 🙂
❤
❤ back at ya. =)
Beautiful.
Thank you!
Moved by camaraderie
I wish to walk alongside
❤ yes yes yes.
Yay, the ending worked! Thanks. =)
You didn’t think it would? And you’re always welcome! 🙂
I see its journey too. Thank you!
And thank you for reading. =)
Feathers have that affect on some 😉 My puppy is always chasing feathers (her knickname is Feathers McGee) – lovely poem!
Thanks! That sounds very cute. =)
A lovely journey; a lovely tanka. ♥
Thanks! Much appreciated. =)
Reminds me of the image on the movie Forrest Gump. Love to watch the feather’s journey and always wonder about the dove or bird it left behind. Thanks for stopping by Poemattic. Melba Christie
I love that movie. Thanks for the return visit. ❤