On the lake,
a mountain.
A reflection
never mistaken for
the original.
Yet, you count
ripples in the water
and forget
who I am.
On the lake,
a mountain.
A reflection
never mistaken for
the original.
Yet, you count
ripples in the water
and forget
who I am.
awesome
Thanks!
π
just gorgeous
Thank you! β€
Very Lovely π Blessings, Friend~
Thanks and the same to you. =)
Your endings. EVERY TIME. β€ beautiful. (May have inspired something, too.. π )
Thanks! Glad it was inspiring. β€
Beautiful. β€
Thank you. =)
Such a simple thought so beautifully rendered!
Glad it worked! =)
Potent. I have to agree that your endings always seem to suit the piece perfectly, and let the reader wander off with a new thought in their head. Wonderful composition, thank you for this.
Thanks for reading! Appreciate it. =)
Beautiful. I love the nuances of your poems, and this one delivers.
Happy it did! =)
A lot of power packed into a very short piece here, redgladiola.
Thank you! Much appreciated. =)