
Leafless hands
Against winter sky
Reach for sun
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Author: redgladiola
Creative writer happily predisposed to flights of fancy. You can find my poetry and short prose at https://redgladiola.wordpress.com
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I love this so much, we forget that we don’t need many words to say something beautifully profound
Thank you! As they say, sometimes less is more. =)
So peaceful
Thanks! =)
Classic haiku worthy of Buson or any of the haiku masters. One of your best! –Ron–
I like the “flipped” version, too!
against winter sky
leafless hands reach
for the Sun
I like your flipped version better! And thanks so much for the high praise. I love your haiku as well. ❤
Perfect. Love!
Thanks! ❤
Nice one!
Thank you! Glad you thought so. =D
Beautiful. I love the imagery in your poems! 🙂
Thank you! ❤
mmmmm…I love Haiku!
Glad you do! And I’m glad you liked this one. =)
Lovely imagery!
Thanks! ❤
love this. time seasons and energy all rolled up together. plus, just now, i am enjoying the shapes of local winter trees, just beginning to bud with their ‘first gold’
Thank you! And “first gold” sounds lovely. It’s actually summer where I am and the leaves are healthy and green.
yes, I read the interview and found you are a northern hemispherian!
🌷Beautiful beautiful
Glad you thought so. Thanks. =)